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 While working on our immediate no-state engine, the need for texture lookup optimization arose.
 API is designed in a way where every single pushed triangle means resolution of texture by path.
 
-My insane mind came to such optimization then: detect is given path pointer is in .rodata and if so, -
-just lookup by hash of the pointer, not whole varying-size string. Constant time and all that.
+My insane mind came to such optimization then: detect whether given path pointer is in .rodata and if so, -
+just lookup by hash of the pointer itself, not whole varying-size string. Constant time and all that.
 
 For that I ended up writing a limited ELF parsing routine that expects `/proc/self/exe`.
 Virtual address space randomization was tricky until I realized that